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to chapter 21
"Tumult in the hospital"
Hello my love!

Unfortunately it took a little longer with the review, although I had already read the chapter.

It’s pretty haywire in the hospital. I felt very well entertained during this chapter !! :)

It's funny how Yasuo's people all stand on the mat right away and make sure that their boss doesn't run away either. They are really loyal through and through, whereby when you experience Yasuo as it is at this moment, you ask yourself why they are following him at all: D But they also know their boss differently. He has many faces. Above all, Akiko is really tough and not squeamish when dealing with her brother.

I found Takumi particularly cute, who is nothing like praise from his big brother. The best way to control him is to give him a task. Fortunately, it's not just Yasuo who knows that. It was sweet that he enjoyed spending time with his brother so much.
Atemu and Seto are really awesome too. What Seto is telling the innocent little Atemu there. There is really a need for a clarification talk. I would be interested to know if Atemu and Seto will also be romantically interested in each other when they are older. Or whether their relationship here is more fraternal.

With Seth you can clearly feel that he is still struggling with himself. On the one hand, he is so sensitive to Yasuo and distracts him while treating him. Besides, he doesn't deny that he still has feelings for him. Even so, he just can't jump over his shadow and let go of his concerns just yet. But you can already tell that it gives him confidence that Yasuo's people will listen to him. There he can get a taste of the advantages that he has as a “partner of the leader”. ;) I have the impression that he is on the verge of taking Yasuo back after he now knows that even Seto speaks out in favor of the relationship between the two and secretly visits Yasuo.

You can also understand Yasuo's feelings: He's hurt that Seth just broke off the whole thing between them and cut off contact without knowing what Yasuo's motives really are.

I had to laugh totally when Seto suddenly came up with "I don't push people away I like", although all these years he was the one who ruined his father's relationships: D The rascal.

I hope Yasuo and Seth can pronounce themselves correctly again without the whole crowd. It's a shame that the situation has escalated almost as much, even though the two actually fit together so well.

Sooo, now I wish you a nice weekend! :)

GLG
Mizu

Halli hello my love! : 3

That doesn't matter. I haven't been much faster lately either, although I had read your chapters long ago.

That pleases me. :) With this story I can go more into the humorous. ^^

They don't have it easy with their boss and sometimes Yasuo is not a model boss. When he's injured, they have more work to do with him than with their children. : D Since he can also do otherwise, they overlook it. In an emergency, you can rely on him, because he can be exhausting from time to time. ;)
Akiko doesn't let anything get near him. She doesn't want to be left behind with a brother like that. ^^
I like it when women can assert themselves among so many men instead of just standing in the background.

Our Takumi is very affectionate and very fixated on his brother, in whom he sees more of a father. In the next chapter there is more of Takumi and what his relationship with Atemu is like.
Since Seto is already enlightened and also older, he naturally wants to pass on his knowledge. An innocent Atemu comes in handy with a lot of questions.
This is the question I asked myself when I started writing this story. I didn't want to make Seto and Atemu too young so that they wouldn't feel like brothers for each other later. At the moment Atemu is still too young and Seto too childlike, but that will change as they get older. Since I can't write short stories, this one will go on for a while. ^^ °
(Way too many ideas)

It's not an easy decision for Seth. The fact that Seto likes one of his partners for the first time favors his decision, if it weren't for this one thing that bothers Seth so much. ;)
He loves Yasuo and wants to be with him, but ...
All that remains is to get to know each and every family member. ^^

Yasuo is in an extremely stressful situation and lets his anger run free. On neutral ground, he would not have been so hard on Seth.

In Seto's defense, he couldn't think of anything better. : D
Atemu has already pushed him a lot and forced him to do it more.

The two have to talk. Seth in particular has many questions that Yasuo should answer for him all.
Both have reached the top end with their emotions and have spurred each other on. When you consider what kind of living conditions Yasuo comes from, a fight is not uncommon for him. Seth got carried away. (They were not good role models for Seto and Atemu) and the fathers subconsciously transmit their emotions to their sons.

I wish you the same. :)
Can I hope for a chapter from you tomorrow Maybe? Doesn't have to be long. * very nice look *
Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 21
"Tumult in the hospital"
Hi,

written really great. Yasuo hates hospitals, you can really tell. With the support of Yasuo's people, Seth manages to get him back to his bed. Yasuo lets Seth decide how to proceed with them. Seth doesn't know what to do about this.

LG

Salmandria

Hey

It's not easy with Yasuo and his people are sometimes on the verge of desperation.
Now it's up to Seth. How he will decide remains to be seen.

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 21
"Tumult in the hospital"
Eve


Haaaahaaaa haaaaahaaaa. I just love this chapter. God I love all of your FF. I rarely laugh so heartily at chapters xD


LG Jasbir

Good evening: 3

How nice that I could make you laugh like that. xDDDD

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 20
"A new suitor?"
Hi,

written really great. So Hisagi has feelings for Seth. This is very interesting. I think it's very good that Seth agreed to talk to Yasuo again. But now Yasuo has to be treated first.

LG

Salmandria

Hey

Our Seth will have his hands full. Yasuo is not the easiest patient.

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 20
"A new suitor?"
Oh that's so cute, where Yasuo mentioned the bear, it was over with me. LOL

I am happy that the two of them are trying to get along. Only Yasuo first has to survive the attack of the killer doctors: D

Great chapter

Yasuo and his bear. ^^

Will Yasuo survive this attack? Seth will have to let all his charisma play and be very convincing.

Thank-you :)
Good Morning my love! Here I am.

Okay, Atemu's plan is really quite simple: D Well, but if he has always had success with it - the success speaks for him. : D
And that he always cried on purpose with Bakura too - what a calculation. Atemu shouldn't be underestimated.

Interesting that Hisagi was just so mean to Seth and now annoys him so much to get his attention. That's almost cute. I think it's nice of Seth that he doesn't let him down verbally, but just lets the matter rest.

Yasuo dared to venture into the enemy camp of his own accord: D Unfortunately, he now has to face the consequences. And of course his clumsiness does the rest. I have the impression that Seth cannot hold out much longer. Yasuo has almost won him over again. And if Seth is only interested in Seto's safety, but he would rather that Yasuo continue to be part of the family, he really doesn't have much to counter this option.

Hm, that Ryuji is no longer alive, actually makes sense. Still it is bad that Yasuo has to resort to such means immediately. If he really doesn't want any secrets from Seth in the future, he should urgently confess this fact to him.

I am curious to see whether Yasuo will be treated. Surely he will have to stay in the hospital for a while - his personal horror.

GLG and have a nice week! <3
Mizu

Good evening my dear! :)

Atemu is still a kid and he mostly works with this tactic. However, so far it has always been about little things that Yasuo did not consider particularly important. ;)

Hisagi is madly in love, but he lacks the courage. It is easier to talk to the other person by the mouth so that he does not become an outsider too.
Seth can imagine that Hisagi has a problem with his own orientation and tries to suppress it. So Seth has decided to accept Hisagi's closeness and let it slide first.

Yasuo was brave, jumped over his shadow and rattled down the stairs. : D
He stood in his own way.
Seth will have his hands full and will get to know Yasuo from a completely different perspective. Not on his cool side, but he won't care if he's trying to escape Seth's army.
Seth will still reach his limits. ;)
If he finds out that Seto is still messing with Yasuo, he may think about it.

Yasuo will have to be honest and tell Seth the whole story as it happened.
As for Ryuji, Yasuo is referring to his experience. He inevitably has to deal with people like that often and has seen a lot. Whether Seth will see it that way remains to be seen.

Yasuo will not be treated voluntarily. This will be Seth's biggest challenge. : D

I wish you a nice evening and a pleasant week.
Lovely wishes
Hayley
to chapter 20
"A new suitor?"
Eve


No really, I think Yasuo is cute to eat. And Atemu first. The little one, I know he has to cope hahah


LG Jasbir

Good evening! : 3

Atemu would be fine on his own in an emergency. ^^
The cheeky little badger knows how to do it.
Our Seth won't have an easy time with Yasuo. After all, Yasuo is in "hostile" territory. : D

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 19
"Lovesickness"
Hello my love :),

No, I haven't forgotten you, I'm just running late again * shame *

Man, the poor. It's not just the fathers who suffer, the kids too.
And how!

On the one hand, I can understand Seth. On the other hand, I think it's a shame that he doesn't even give Yasuo the chance to explain himself.
It is understandable that he has to think about it first and maybe also has to sort his thoughts ... but still. He could at least answer Yasuo that he doesn't want to talk to him at the moment and that he needs time. But don't even get in touch ... That's nasty ...

And poor Yasuo with his cuddly toy ... I had to laugh when I read that he had written "Seth" on his forehead. You really suffer with him.

However, it was nice to read that he took care of the boys, in spite of everything, and also the flashback of how it was for him as a young man with three toddlers ... Really heartbreaking ... and how cute Masao and Takumi were were <3
You really get a sugar shock: D

I'm excited to see how things will go on with Joey and his father.
You keep surprising you: D

Feel like you have been chatting and see you hopefully soon: PPP

best regards
BlackDeath

Hello my sweetie! <3

I'm late this time too. ^^ °

Seth is not behaving right, but he is not doing this on purpose. He is overwhelmed with everything. He has never voluntarily distanced himself from someone with whom he was madly in love.
He wants to see Yasuo, but responsibility to his son keeps him from doing so. (If he only knew where Seto was regularly);)

Our Yasuo is deadly miserable and since Seth behaves very coldly, he got the idea to compare his Seth with a polar bear. (Seth will be able to listen to this for the rest of his life, should things go back to normal)

It wasn't easy for him and the three naughty badgers didn't give anything to Yasuo. ^^
I definitely want to write a flashback of Yasuo and his three bullies. : D

I am happy if your story continues. Don't let me fidget for so long. ó.ò
I cuddle you very much.
Hayley
to chapter 19
"Lovesickness"
Hi,

I liked it again. Yasuo and Seth are lovesick. Yasuo writes messages to Seth, but Seth does not answer. So Atemu has a plan to bring Seth and Yasuo back together. I think it won't be as easy as Atemu thinks.

LG

Salmandria

Hey

Atemu won't give up anytime soon and he has a lot of faith in his plans. If the first one doesn't work, he tries again.

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 19
"Lovesickness"
Oh man .. I hope Atemu's plan works and doesn't backfire ... It's really cute that Yasuo got a polar bear to replace Seth, I had to smile really. And that's called Mafia Boss: D. I think if Seth had seen, maybe he would have given them both a chance. ;)

I'm curious how it goes on with the lovesick sick.

Until the next chapter :)
Sooo, I'll be back at a late hour! :)

Oh, the new chapter was so sad - and yet somehow cute at the same time. Yasuo's overcoming lovesickness with the polar bear was just sugar! <3 Seth should get the polar bears as mascots.

It's really hard for Seth. Yasuo wants his heart back, but morally he cannot represent it. Still, I have the impression that he's almost ready to talk to Yasuo again. I think he misses the family atmosphere with the Katsuros and Yasuos close enough. But what's going on with Hisagi all of a sudden? All of a sudden he's so nice and gives Seth advice? Does he think Seth is doing the wrong thing to just throw away something so good? Maybe because he would like to be as lucky as Seth and Yasuo himself? If Yasuo's theory were correct, Hisagi should be happy that Seth is available again - even if he would certainly not dare to take a first step.

I was surprised that Seto doesn't care what Yasuo does for a living. Who would have thought at the beginning of the FF that he would take Yasuo into his heart so much that he would want him back at any cost, no matter who he really is. He also seems to have realized how much Yasuo cares about his father. At Atemu’s plan I’m already feeling bad: D I’m curious what he has come up with "foolproof" for both of them.

And as if that weren't enough compassion, there's Joey, who really breaks your heart. He's kind of cute and cute and such an open-minded kid who just needs someone to talk to and play with, someone to deal with him. That he is so sad that his father is no longer interested in him really touched me. But maybe Yasuo is right and he can really be helped. Apparently his lethargy and his crash stems from the fact that he has not overcome the death of his wife and daughter. I hope Yasuo can still talk to Mr. Wheeler. Atemu is really lucky to have a father like Yasuo!

The flashback scene from Yasuo's youth was also very funny. Somehow, Yasuo has a good nose for getting things under control. Well, he could practice early too. Three such exhausting guys can drive you to despair. That is why he is so good at negotiating with Atemu today and at putting him in his limits.

Now I'm really excited about Atemu's glorious plan to bring Seth and Yasuo back together! Hopefully it will work!
Kind regards and a good start to the weekend
Mizu

Good evening, Mizu!

I think Seth won't be thrilled if he finds out he's compared to a polar bear. : D

It is not easy for Seth to keep the distance to Yasuo. He would like to go back to him immediately, but his sanity holds him back.
Well, Hisagi has his own tactics. : D
What is going on in his head is not yet revealed. ;)

Yasuo is the first to accept Seto and he really felt comfortable with him. Through his father's past relationship, Seto knows that this cannot be taken for granted. Therefore he is secretly glad that he can continue to visit Yasuo without him sending him away again. This is just more evidence to him that his father needs to get back to Yasuo.
Little Atemu has a lot of nonsense in his head and is not afraid to implement his plans. He's a little too confident. ;)

Joey doesn't have it easy and is very lonely.He and his father definitely need help. Yasuo now knows that too and Atemu won't leave him alone until he does something. ;)
Jonathan has slipped a long way and Joey hasn't told the full story. Then you would understand your father a little better.

There are a few more scenes from the past with his three boys. ^^
Yasuo had anything but easy with the little bastards, but you grow with your tasks.

Have a nice evening and a great rest of Sunday. :)
Hayley
to chapter 19
"Lovesickness"
Eve

Omg what a cool sock Seto is. His father should still be wondering what the boys are up to hahahaha. And my poor heart beat for Joey so I hope Yasou can help.

LG Jasbir

Good evening!

The guys are not giving up that quickly and they will do anything to get what they want.
Little Joey is very lonely. He and his father definitely need help.

LG Hayley
to chapter 18
"Separate ways"
Hi,

written very intensely. When Seth learns that Yasuo is the leader of a Mafia clan, he reacts as Yasuo feared. I'm glad you found Atemu and Seto. Ryuji got what he deserved. Seth is totally confused because he has doubts about his decision and his moral conscience.

LG

Salmandria

Hey

This news came as a shock to Seth, he had previously taken Yasuo for a harmless househusband and loving father.
Yasuo no longer felt sorry for Ryuji, he went too far for that.
Now it remains to be seen whether the two will find each other again.

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 18
"Separate ways"
A wonderful good evening: D

And now seriously ... HOW CAN YOU SEPARATE THE TWO ????? TT___TT
I fought so hard in the other story that you saw off Yumi and now Seth is embarrassed ... It can't all be true!
I hope that is really only due to the situation and he will soon notice how much he misses Yasuo ... And then ... Yes then Yasuo will make him fidget ... * Hihihi *

No, kidding aside.
I'm really sad that the two of them are now (hopefully only temporarily !!!) separated.
Now that there was a really idyllic family life, even Seto and Atemu got along and apparently liked each other ...
* sigh * I guess I'll just have to wait and see how it goes on ...

So, and now that I've vented my frustration, I can also comment on the rest: D

Although Takumi is the total freak, it's kind of cute to read how much he wants to please his brother and immediately takes care of finding his nephew and his friend.
Masao is one of my favorite haras in your story anyway: D And here he is even the really cool uncle, as I think everyone wants him to be

The fact that the Katsuros are so broadly positioned in various functional areas surprised me. On the other hand, it was somehow clear, after all, "Mafiosi" are always well informed.
Atemu actually surprised me. If you know him from the other story as a small, helpless unlucky fellow, he puts a very nice boot away here to protect Seto.

I am definitely looking forward to a hopefully soon sequel: D
And to reconcile the two dads, I'll sign up for a lemon ... reconciliation sex and so on;)

Express yourself really hard and wish you a nice evening.

best regards
BlackDeath

Good evening my sweetie! : 3

I'm not to blame, it was only Seth who did this. o.O.
I tried to talk to him, but he doesn't listen and does what he wants. How it goes on, however, I will not say a word about it. : P

Since Yasuo was a very caring dad to Takumi, he would do anything for him. ^^
He is like a child who is still hanging on the tail of Yasuo's skirt.
I like Masao too. He's so wonderfully relaxed and prefers to take part in Atemu's stupid things rather than talk him out of them.

Most of it is still Isamus' legacy and Yasuo only had to sit down in the nest made, with a few corrections, of course.
Unlike in my long history, Atemu grew up with Yasuo and therefore has a good deal of self-confidence. (No wonder with dad ^^) Sometimes a little too much, but on the other hand he's still very childlike. Of course, in the end he is as proud as Bolle when he has persevered so bravely and Yasuo even sees it.

You get your lemon.: D
First I have to do some persuading with Seth. The good can really be very stubborn and opinionated. -_- "

I push you back, make you comfortable. : D
Hayley
Good morning, dear Hayley!

oh man, what a sad ending. All of this really shook Seth's world. Above all, Yasuo could not confess the truth to him in peace, but was forced by the situation to act quickly.

Even if I feel sorry for Yasuo and Atemu, I can understand Seth's first reaction and his dismissive, harsh words. You don't find out something like that about your partner every day and of course Seth feels duped at first. And then of course Seth is also deterred because he believes that Yasuo is not acting according to his own values. How can he leave his son in such company with a clear conscience? And then the family also includes people like Takumi, whom he cannot assess at all.

Although we now know that Yasuo, as in the other story, belongs to a Mafia clan, he is still a little behind the mountain with the business that he does today. I am curious to find out more about it.

Seth probably needs time to process all of this first. Sure, he'll miss Yasuo, but I don't think he'll be ready to reunite with him anytime soon. While reading, I thought: It would have been funny if Seth had really been a policeman instead of a doctor in this FF. That would have made the conflict even bigger: DD

Yaaay, Bakura !!! * Waving the flag * I am so glad that he came to his senses and has now taken action. That he even asked strangers for help! Good thing he met Masao. I hope he turns away from Ryouji now, but I think the mood between Seto and him will be bad for now. I hope Seto gives him one more chance so Bakura doesn't end up with the wrong people.

By the way, I like Akiko very much. I was happy that it now appeared.

Sooo, that's it from me again!
best regards
Your mizu

PS: I removed the profile picture because I was somehow still dissatisfied with it ^ /// ^ Exactly, the one in the new photo is my dog ​​Frida. I totally love dogs too !! <3

Good Morning my love! : 3

For Seth everything fell over him like a lavine. That was all too much that day and a lot of thoughtless words were uttered. Seth already has respect for Takumi and that doesn't make it any better.
That's why Yasuo found it so difficult to get out with the language.

I will definitely tell you about it. ^^

Had I made a policeman out of Seth, the conflict would have been greater. XD
In any case, he would not have drifted off so quickly and would have called his colleagues first. I also don't know whether Yasuo would have gotten involved with him then.

Bakura has taken the first step in the right direction and must now continue on this path. It has helped Bakura a lot not to have to listen to accusations. Next he has to make up with Seto and Atemu and that will take a lot of effort for him.

Akiko will appear more often. I like their lively character. : D She is in no way inferior to her brothers.

Frida is very sweet. <3
I also have a dog, you can't be without her. : D
I liked your picture and I found the hair worked out great. I'm curious how your next picture will be.
I'm also busy right now and I'm still waiting for the pens that should come today so that I finally have the right skin color. : D

I wish you a great weekend. :)
Do not let them bother you.
Hayley
to chapter 18
"Separate ways"
First take a deep breath, really exciting chapter, I already thought that Yasuo could be something like that. I can understand Seth that he now needs time to digest this, but I hope that he gives Yasuo a chance because he is not that bad. And right now, Atemu and Seto have finally welded together as friends.
I'm looking forward to more, and hopefully Seth is not so stubborn.

Super exciting chapter, keep it up :)

Halli hello: 3

It all came at once for Seth and he didn't have a minute to let it all sink in. It went way too fast.
It's going to be tough for Seto and Atemu. They get along really well by now. It was a blow, especially for Seto, because he really liked Yasuo and expected it to end so quickly.

Thank you very much, but I'm happy. : D

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 18
"Separate ways"
Eve

Thank God the children could be saved. And yes I can understand Seth. But I hope he doesn't give up on himself and Yasuo.

LG Jasbir

Good evening! :)

It was all too much for Seth at once. His world meets that of Yasuo and he has to try to come to terms with it. Time will tell whether he can ever do that.

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 17
"Painful past"
A wonderful good morning (or noon)!

Ui, you were busy with this story. I would not have expected a new chapter so quickly. How nice!

Poor Seth. Now he knows one of Yasuo's big riddles, but not the other one yet. Yasuo is really teasing him (and your readers)! >. <'You always think: Now he's telling him! And then something comes up.

Nevertheless, it was a big step for Yasuo to tell Seth about the cause of his doctor phobia. That he has opened up so much is the best proof that he is serious about Seth and that he wants him in his life, wants him to know who he is and what made him who he is today.

Yasuo's past, as expected, is no less terrible than your other story. Except that this time it is not Akiko who dies, but the parents of the four. Of course, one can understand Yasuo's self-reproach, even if he really couldn't know what was going to happen. But against this background it is also clear why Yasuo is so tough when it comes to parenting. He just had to grow up very quickly and take responsibility for children. And also children who were not always that easy (Takumi: D).

You have also shed more light on the fear of doctors. I can well understand that Yasuo felt that he was losing control and making decisions over his head. Not being able to decide for yourself how to act because you are simply not conscious is a stupid situation.

I also found some details exciting again, for example Takumi's talent and obsession with numbers and codes, which were also used in the other story.

I'm curious to see if Atemu's cousin and Akiko's other child (I don't know whether a girl or a boy) will appear again.

But now I'm especially curious to see what Yasuo will do to find Atemu and Seto. Seth doesn't take the situation that seriously, but Yasuo seems to be assessing everything correctly and is probably drawing on his wealth of experience.

I'm still hugely disappointed in Bakura! Come on, now finally stand your husband and help them both! * Cheer on Bakura * Show them that you are not so cowardly!

Sooo, that's it from me again! I wish you a nice, relaxed Saturday!

best regards
Mizu

Have a wonderful good evening, my love! : 3

This story went well with writing. :)

Yasuo just doesn't dare. ó_ò He is afraid of losing Seth. His feeling advises him to keep quiet. At first he was convinced that Seth would understand and now there is uncertainty. Seth comes from a different background. Whether or not the fact that Yasuo told about his past will help with this remains to be seen.

Yasuo has been through a lot. With three boys, where one is livelier than the other, he is hardened. : D
As you have already seen, Takumi was and is a particularly tough nut to crack. In the next chapter he is also there.
I really need to write a flashback of how Yasuo fared with three children. : D

To be sedated against his will was a drop in the ocean for Yasuo and he has lost his trust in doctors for good.
Seth will still have to do a lot of convincing.

Akiko and her children will also feature. :)
It would be a shame if not. ^^

It's not that Bakura doesn't want to get help. He just got scared of Ryuji because he misjudged him. Maybe he'll get the chance to do the right thing.

Thank you for your lovely and long review. <3
I wish you a nice Saturday evening. :)
Hayley
to chapter 17
"Painful past"
Oh man, that's tough. Respect that Yasuo looked after his brothers so touchingly at a young age. High attention. Very good educational chapter. Now you know why he doesn't like doctors and now to his job. I think I have a clue and I am very excited to continue.
Now the scraps are flying ... great chapters.

Good evening! : 3

Yasuo has a lot behind him and he had to grow up straight away. Ryuji has started a big mistake. If he only knew. : D Never piss off a Yasuo.
I am glad that you enjoyed this chapter. ^ - ^

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 17
"Painful past"
Hi,

written very intensely. Yasuo tells Seth about his father's murder and where his aversion to doctors comes from. It's good that Yasuo called his people and they'll help find Seto and Atemu.

LG

Salmandria

Hey

Yasuo is really serious about Seth and doesn't want any secrets from him.
The more you help, the greater the chances of success. Now one can only hope that they will be found quickly.

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 17
"Painful past"
Eve


Omg omg Bakura and Ruyji will regret this. But something of ...
LG Jasbir


PS: I love your FF

Good evening! : 3

Ryuji in particular will regret it. Never piss off a Yasuo. ;)

I am so happy to read this. : D ^ - ^

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 16
"Misunderstanding"
Oh dear, that won't end well and that for Ryuji. Yasuo would make short work of that. I'm really excited to see what his job is ... I'm already looking forward to the next chapter ...

Hello! : 3

If Yasuo gets his hands on Ryuji, there won't be much left of him. ;)
For Seth, his "job" will also be a big surprise.

Thank you for your lovely review. : D
best regards
Hayley
Good evening, dear Hayley! Here I am!

I could laugh myself to myself at Yasuo and Seth: D What the hell is Yasuo doing now for a living? But you make it really damn exciting. At first Seth thinks he's unemployed and now Yasuo is so upset that he's feverish. The poor really don't get a chance to finally get out with the language. But it's so bad when you have something on your mind and can't get rid of it. : D You really suffer with. Yasuo's aversion to any kind of medical examination is also becoming more and more mysterious.

So, Yasuo is very sure about Hisagi's feelings for Seth. I was beginning to think that Hisagi might react so negatively because he is afraid of his own sexuality. I totally celebrated this blonde doctor. It's good that she stands up to the men and says what's up! I would have got up and left too!

It's nice that Seth has already loosened up a lot after just one day and that he doesn't care what the others think or whisper. It is very sweet how he is happy about Yasuo's visit and then immediately gets more appetite. :) And how Yasuo also longs for Seth. Yasuo is a man of contrasts. A tough guy at the same time and the top softie at the same time.

Auweia, what has Atemu got himself back into? I understand he doesn't want Yasuo to interfere, but what is he going to do against Joey's father? He is honored that he cares so much about Joey and wants to help him, but he can do little on his own. And then the two of them don't even tell where they're going. It goes without saying that then, of all things, they will find themselves in a dicey situation.

Oh, Bakura, what are you doing? I'm loyal to him, but of course I don't like the fact that he delivers breath and Seto to the knife like that. Now he should at least stand his ground and really take sides instead of just standing next to it and watching. I hope he still chooses the right side. For example, he could inform Yasuo and Seth ... well, let's see.

I'm really sorry for Joey.I hope when Yasuo finds out how his father is feeling at some point, he'll hook up and work to ensure that Joey gets a better life.

Sooo, that was it again from me. :)
By the way, thanks again for the compliment on my professional picture. I'm really really happy! * - *

Then I wish you a wonderful week!
I hope I can do a new chapter by the weekend. Unfortunately there is a lot going on for me this week. But I try!

Kind regards <3
Mizu

Halli Hello, how nice that you left me with another review! :)

The poor man just doesn't manage to confess to Seth what he's doing because he could possibly flee.
Our Yasuo is currently living in his personal hell. He wants to say it, but he just can't do it.
For Seth, Yasuos left a lot of free time to just this one conclusion. He can't know what's going on in the background.

It remains to be seen whether Yasuo is really right. In any case, Seth was puzzled.
Not everyone thinks like some colleagues. The blonde doctor can assert herself against her male colleagues.

Seth always feels more comfortable and secure when Yasuo is around. His true character is slowly emerging. Even Yasuo can no longer be without his Seth and he is much more sensitive than it seems.

Atemu tries to emulate his father and wants to prove that he is not weak. It always looks so easy with dad and with Seto by his side he felt even more secure. Now he's in a mess and neither Seth nor Yasuo know where their sons went. There will be a raging Yasuo.

By the end of the chapter, Bakura has already regretted his actions. He thought he would feel better after that, but the opposite was true. Now he's getting to know Ryuji properly and what a lousy dog ​​he is.

I see that too. Poor Joey needs help. Atemu will have to seek an open conversation with his father so that something can change for Joey.

I know about writing. Sometimes you have a lot of time and then you hardly manage anything. Do not stress yourself, I will remain loyal to you as a reader. :)
We'll read each other on Sunday at the latest. I wish you a not so stressful week. We have already made it through two days. : D
best regards
Hayley
to chapter 16
"Misunderstanding"
Hi,

written really great. Yasuo finally wants to tell Seth what he does for a living, but he gets it totally wrong. That Atemu and Seto are now in Ryuji's power is bad.

LG

Salmandria

Hey

Yasuo doesn't have it easy, but he has to tell Seth the truth.
If Yasuo finds out, he'll be furious.

Kind regards, Hayley
to chapter 16
"Misunderstanding"
Eve


Ohhhh my godtttt. Bakura and this Ruyij won't survive that .... I'm so excited about the next chapter.

LG Jasbir

Yasuo will go wild with anger. One underestimates the other.

Kind regards, Hayley
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